Surrender
He came to the edge,
The edge of himself.
He looked in the mirror,
It glared back at him.
He knew he must change,
But change wouldn’t come.
He stayed at the edge,
The edge of himself.
Was there a hope?
A hope for change.
Could things be made right?
It glared back at him.
He longed for a change,
But change wouldn’t come.
He fell to his knees
And asked for help.
a very emotive piece, Jacob....and I do believe 'he' looked for help in the right place!!
ReplyDeletethis almost brought tears to my eyes...excellent!
ReplyDeleteVery good writing!!
ReplyDeleteExcellent piece!!!! Sometimes change comes when we expect it the least...
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