inner peace and happiness are found in the last line of your poem... :)
Joy and peace are good, i like this a lot
There are equal amounts of joy and happiness stored in our psyche. They both remain locked away and only we have the key. It is always our decision which door remains locked and which one we open.
I will echo Tim's wordsnicely done, jacob
I think that key is inside yourself.
Jacob, your poem has a similar message to mine I think. Well done.
The keys to joy and peace are many different things to many different people. Nicely written, Jacob!!