Tuesday, July 2, 2013

Creative Challenge 258... memory

A Forgiven Life

Memories are abundant.
Sometimes quite redundant.
Sifting through the thoughts.
Sifting through the emotions.
Climb aboard the roller coaster.
Hear the popping toaster.
Journey across the miles.
Journey across the years.
Find rest in a forgiven life.
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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousJuly 2, 2013 at 7:51 AM

    very, very nice, Jacob!

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  2. Pat Gerber-RelfJuly 2, 2013 at 11:17 AM

    that is just super

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  3. Dim LampJuly 2, 2013 at 12:08 PM

    Well said! Without forgiveness life is sheer misery.

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  4. UnknownJuly 2, 2013 at 12:39 PM

    So fitting for what just went on in my life. Lost my uncle (my age) to cancer and also a neighbor. Been thinking of those memories lately.

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  5. Danette July 2, 2013 at 3:36 PM

    you know the key to living the way we all should, it's hard work sometimes, but oh so worth it
    (good to see you back :P)

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  6. BarryJuly 3, 2013 at 4:23 AM

    Wonderful;)

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  7. Belita Isabel JaneiraJuly 3, 2013 at 4:31 AM

    Wow... I really love this...it's beautiful!

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  8. tesstruhartzJuly 3, 2013 at 7:29 AM

    Very good, original for the theme

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  9. MitchyLRJuly 3, 2013 at 8:36 AM

    Nicely written Jacob!!

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  10. SofiaJuly 3, 2013 at 2:56 PM

    Sincere taken on the theme.

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