Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Creative Challenge # 251... searching

A Thorn in the Flesh

Searching for the muse.
Wanting to abuse.
Pain so evident.
Who can circumvent.
Screeching, crying, calling out.
Filled with anguish, filled with doubt.
Who can help me now?
As by this thorn I’m bowed.
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6 comments:

  1. MitchyLRMay 15, 2013 at 9:24 AM

    Hi Jacob. Good to see you back online, it's been a while!!

    Quite a dark, tormented picture the words paint.

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  2. Danette May 15, 2013 at 12:10 PM

    well described emotions, we all have our thorns...I recently came across a rose bush that had no scent, my daughter said they are for places where people don't want to attract the bees...what the heck is this world coming to??? seriously...sheesh :P

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  3. Belita Isabel JaneiraMay 16, 2013 at 3:30 AM

    Hope some light will clear away the darkness surrounding you...

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  4. Tim .. Another MP RefugeeMay 16, 2013 at 2:47 PM

    Good job, Jacob

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  5. BarryMay 17, 2013 at 12:22 AM

    Very cool I love it;)

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  6. Pat Gerber-RelfMay 17, 2013 at 10:20 AM

    Looks like you suffered with your search and I hope you found what you was looking for.

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