Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Creative Challenge 246... have you ever noticed

Magenta cloud forms
Have you ever noticed it
During the sunset
Goes from east to west
Color moves accross the sky
Have you noticed it

6 comments:

  1. looking through your eyes is wonderful
    awesome 5-7-5

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  2. The only thing missing with this awesome haiku is your photo!!

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  3. Very nicely written, Jacob. And in answer to the question, yes I most certainly have!!

    Here is MINE

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  4. Yes, and now even more thanks to your words.

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  5. Your words are put together as if you tossed them into the air....sort of like a spring shower....unexpected in a way that makes me want to raise my face and soak the pleasure in.

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